I like this, Michael.
Nice storytelling! I like how you used both sides of the artwork and incorporated them in the writing. A++++!
sweet dude! i like the art work you chose, your poem went perfect with it!
i like this poem alot. this poem reminds me of tree life we are stuck in slavery until we are set free. good poem
I like how you talk about people trapped in the painting of grey and cant get out.
Good job Michael this is one of my favorite poems of yours~ I love the "In their dreams they live in world of color" it makes you think alot because dreams are even better than people imagine!very good
I really like this. The art work adds another component to it that makes it more interesting.
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I like this, Michael.
Nice storytelling! I like how you used both sides of the artwork and incorporated them in the writing. A++++!
sweet dude! i like the art work you chose, your poem went perfect with it!
i like this poem alot. this poem reminds me of tree life we are stuck in slavery until we are set free. good poem
I like how you talk about people trapped in the painting of grey and cant get out.
Good job Michael this is one of my favorite poems of yours~ I love the "In their dreams they live in world of color" it makes you think alot because dreams are even better than people imagine!
very good
I really like this. The art work adds another component to it that makes it more interesting.
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